You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter 1. Say how you feel about his performance 2. give details of your musical activities 3.explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear KK, I am writing
letter to congratulate you on your astonishing performance at BKC on Saturday. I am a huge fan of yours and your music is always mesmerizing for me. I am really lucky that I was present at
concert. I have got to see some new flavours in your music. I just can not explain how happy I am to write
letter to you. I am
learning music for a long time now and got a good proficiency in playing Casio CT6590 which is always an integral part of the performance.
I play the guitar and do the singing
in various stage performances.
, I am doing a lot of performance. But I think I still lack perfection, in some of the nodes and in my singing. I will really appreciate it and I will be really thankful to you from bottom of my heart; if you can spare some time to give me some tips to improve my knowledge. Yours sincerely Shravan R Yadav
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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