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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society.

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In the present time, Youngsters have not been taking
science
 stream in colleges in most nations from the
last
 some years. I will try to shed some light on what kind of reasons is behind
this
 concept and what influence locality has to deal with due to
this
 complication in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, many learners do not take
science
 as a course in academics because they do not understand the skill. To put it more simply, most of the universities prefer to teach education to their student by academic method and many
students
 have found a lot of difficulties when they try to learn
science
 from books. As we know
science
 is a subject that can be learned easily if it is taught by practical experiments but most educational institutions do not like to teach their
students
 by
such
 a method and so that's why many
students
 do not select
science
 as their career.
Furthermore
,
science
 is a quite expensive subject in some countries.
In other words
,
Science
 is a confusing course and due to
this
, there are very limited good teachers who know how to teach
science
 in right ways, to employ those teachers, educational institutions have to pay an excessive amount salary to
such
 teachers and to cover that amount, academies make the fees overpriced but some
students
 who do not have good financial backgrounds , they could not afford that fees and they decide to choose another field.
On the other hand
, Societies
also
 face some bad influences if
students
 do not select
science
 in universities. As we know
science
 is very crucial in human life and if individuals do not learn about
science
then
 society has to face a shortage of people who know about
science
 and locality do not get progress in the department .
For example
, if a student is very good in
science
 but because of some issues do not take
science
 as his chief stream and start learning another topic
then
 it could be a massive loss to society. To conclude, the main reason why
students
 do not take
science
 in universities,
that is
 expensive fees and the old way of teaching.
Moreover
, society
also
 has to deal with a great loss because of
this
 thing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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