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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

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Issues related to
school
 classes are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that non-academic courses; including music,
art
 and drama, should be offered to the younger generation like other
subjects
 in the
school
. I totally agree with the view as studying these three
subjects
 have a positive impact on
children
's education and human abilities in the future. The principal reason is that arts have directly associated with
children
's imagination as well as their brains enhancement.
In other words
, the lessons related to entertainment matters;
such
 as musical shows and movies, can lead pupils to have more concentrate on the lesson.
For instance
, English teachers in Thailand have been using lyrics in order to improve students' listening skills over recent years.
Consequently
, entertainment activities play a vital role in terms of educational tools. Another point is that learning these
subjects
 might have a great result in
children
's career path in the future. In fact, people in the
art
 sector; including musicians and artists, have been acknowledged in the modern world more than in the prior era.
Thus
, students should be offered to study a variety of classes since the favours of humans is different. To exemplify, famous actors in Thailand often reveal that they opt to study major in science
instead
 of traditional
art
 at the high
school
 level as they have insufficient information about drama lessons.
As a result
, they failed in the classroom. In
this
 regard, it is evident that
children
 should be acquired non-academical skills in their primary
school
 in order to have a wide range of human's abilities when they raise up. All things considered; I am of the opinion that the
subjects
; namely music,
art
 and drama, are essential tools for
children
 today, compared with academic
subjects
.
Therefore
, academies and parents should have an awareness of supporting these three
subjects
 to becoming compulsory
subjects
 for the future generation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • holistic development
  • fostering
  • emotional intelligence
  • problem-solving skills
  • cultural awareness
  • curriculum
  • engaging
  • memorable
  • nurture
  • talents
  • core subjects
  • academic
  • professional success
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