You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Steve Smith from Australia. I am writing to you to share the feedback on the cookery
course
I attended
last
week arranged by your organization.
To begin
, I was excited to join the
course
as I am always interested to explore different cuisines across the world. To my surprise, the expert chefs taught us so many varieties of cuisines in
such
a short time. Especially, I enjoyed the classes on preparing Italian dishes
such
as Pasta. In fact, I didn’t even realize how the time flew while learning various recipes. I was overwhelmed by the quality and the outcome of the
course
. I learned many things about food preparation and presentation. I tried my favourite cuisine which is Chinese. I loved the dishes prepared as they were delicious. I served them to my family and they liked them too. I shared the recipes with my friend who was interested in them. In future, please try to arrange another
course
like
this
with other cuisines that are rarely known but have to be tasted at least once. I hope to hear from you soon on
this
. Yours sincerely, Steve Smith
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