Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is considered one of the most significant parts of everybody's life and should be accessible for all. To make it accessible, some people suggest that it should be offered free of charge. In my opinion, education is a fundamental human right and should not discriminate
people
based on their wealth. Less fortunate people are empowered by education to improve their economic status while it helps them contribute to society's growth.Change preposition
against people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite