Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
The strengthening of international bonds between Nations has been paramount over the years.
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some argue that enhancing businesses and cultural relationships among Linking Words
countries
is good, while some believe it can lead to losing one National identification. Use synonyms
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draw a conclusion.
On the one hand, as the popular saying goes that ‘a tree can not make a forest’. So is Linking Words
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a nation, for a Nation to thrive and grow economically, it has to be able to relate with other Linking Words
countries
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For instance
, China is well known for creating technological gadgets, for them to be able to monetize their ideas, they have to liaise with other Linking Words
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so as to export their goods and Use synonyms
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grow financially. Linking Words
Furthermore
, not just that relating with other Linking Words
countries
raises Gross Domestic Products (GDP), but it Use synonyms
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helps to curb war and misunderstanding thereby promoting peace.
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On the other hand
, due to these contacts, traditions are being neglected and modern ways are being embraced. Linking Words
For example
, in Nigeria, a lot of traditional ceremonies are being replaced by ceremonies Linking Words
such
as Christmas and the likes. Pupils are no longer taught about their cultures but Linking Words
instead
are being educated on foreign ways. Linking Words
In addition
, most people believe that their lands are being invaded because of the excessive influx of foreigners and relationships with other Linking Words
countries
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To conclude, in my own opinion, I believe traditional interaction between Nations has more benefits than its drawbacks. So it is important to encourage foreign partners to enhance the nation's economy and Use synonyms
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