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People nowadays are used to disposable items meaning that they use things for a short time and throw them away. What is the cause of this and what problems it can lead to?

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 21st century, human life became more materialistic in nature.
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 support reusable
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 for a short period of time.
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,these materials
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 in our surroundings. In
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 essay,I will explain the cause and the problems of
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this
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 subject.
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, there are many reasons for the use of recycled
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 life of
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 .Apparently, concern about environmental pollution, depression of ozone layer, global warming, and resource demobilization is a major subject related to the origin
ofrecycled
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of recycled
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 in our market.
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 government of Kerala introduced reusable carry bags
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 of plastic bags in public
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people
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 throw the storage in their surroundings to
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 soil and water pollution. Admittedly, it is visible that
growing
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 population needs more material goods that
strongly
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 demandedforresource.
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,industrialization, welfare and developmental procedure questioned about
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convenient
 items for future us. So these facts are the origin of reusable
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, disposable items
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an enormous problems
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 in the life of human beings.
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, they will think that buying more
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 is not a big issue for
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 because the
products
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 are mainly going to recycle
machine
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 whereas, it results
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over production
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overproduction
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.
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, the more material
products
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means
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 the more expenditure of money
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 it will negatively influence family budget and economic stability.
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,
people
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's responsibility towards public place safety and neatness will greatly influence.
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people
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 threw disposable glasses and plates after marriage and major ceremonies. Reportedly, studies
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 that in their
concious
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conscious
 mind they believe, it is the duty of
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 to sort out trash work for
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 use In conclusion, there is a saying a 'bird without wings'
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, nature is the true strength of any living and nonliving organism.
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, whoever
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products
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 like disposable or not, make sure that it is our duty to
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preserve
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environment
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 for
future
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generation
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