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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Rawat, I am writing
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 letter with regards to you're approval for presenting time
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 skills for the new
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team
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 that recently joined our company.
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 presentation will be based on the knowledge which I have gained from the conference that I have attended
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 week.
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 seminar was especially focused on time
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 skills and how efficiently an employee can integrate them within their work life. My lecture, as the name suggests will be on time
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 skills and as a part of the
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 skill set will be important for the better productivity of the
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.
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 presentation will be 2 hours long and with concise information on what can be practically applied to our day to day tasks. As
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 presentation will be only for the
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, which comprises of 15 employees. We can consider the session be conducted on a conference room
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 floor of our office which can easily accommodate our participants. I hope you will consider my suggestion and provide your permission for the same. Yours Sincerely, Sachin Hegde

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