You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Hi Karan, How's it going? Hope you're doing well and still having a great

time

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at uni. Thank you so much to invite me to visit your country. I'

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exicted

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excited

to meet you again.

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time

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, it was

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enjoyable and memorable

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with you. I would be grateful if you give me some suggestions regarding

nation

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the nation

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, I want to give some presents to

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family but I'

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confused to choose something. Can you give me

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idea about your parents

choice

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chose

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it would be helpful for me

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, I'

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interested to know about the clothing and the activities of your country. How's the weather there? I need to carry what kind of

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clothes

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? Any special occasions are coming.

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kind

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a kind

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foody

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a foody

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person. Tell me

little

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bit about the food there. How's it taste and about the delicious dishes which can I try? I can't wait to try all of these. I'

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looking forward to hearing from you asap. I'd love to spend

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with you and

catch-up

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catch up

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with you. Lots of love, Priya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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