You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • Describe the problem • Say how long it has been a problem • Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am writing

this

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letter to inform

that

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you that

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, I am

unsastified

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unsatisfied

with your irrigation

systerm

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system

. I know that you have been planted a lot of flowers in your backyard and your wife love to have a nice garden.

However

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everyday

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when you turn on the

sprinkers

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sprinklers

sprinkler

watering

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water

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your flowers, all my clothes in the

clothline

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clothing

clothesline

are sop with your water too. My wife

have

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told me

this

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many times, I just told her to get the clothes off before you turn the

sprinkers

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sprinklers

on. Unfortunately,

sometime

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sometimes

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we are running late, so all our janes and t-shirt are wet. I have noticed

this

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for more

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than a

months

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and I want to explain

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it to

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you

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apply

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face to face, but we have very

less

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little

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chance

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change

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chance

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to see each other. Could you please adjust the irrigation

systerm

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system

or maybe try to move the

sprinkers

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sprinklers

away from my garden. If you could do that for me I will be very

appreciate

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appreciative

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as your know a happy wife

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apply

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happy life. Thank you. Kind regards June

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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