Advantages and disadvantages of online education

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The situation that we are in right now is really confusing and
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for all of us. Our parents are losing their jobs and businesses and the children are closed all day long at
home
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in front of the computers. The coronavirus affected a lot of different aspects of everyone’s life. One totally new thing for students is online
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and not just for one class or one month but
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and people are with drastically different opinions for it.
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, I think that online
education
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or not the
kids
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who want to learn and do their school work will do it and those who don’t-
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. Some parents are positive that they don’t forcibly push their
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to study and they feel calmer when they know that their children are
home
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and safe.
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, online
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provides more opportunities for when you are done with your work or test, like eating something homemade and healthy(not burgers,pizza or
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etc
.), taking a shower, cleaning, doing
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homework
or preparing for the
next
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class. Another advantage is that you are
home
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and you don’t have to wake up early to do your morning routine and travel to school, which is actually really far away for some students.
On the other hand
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,
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type of
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can be really ineffective because the bigger percentage of teachers are more than 45 and don’t use the new technologies
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,
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leads to problems with sharing screens, turning on microphone and camera, not hearing the others in the meeting and
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, a lot of students trespass on their rights, sometimes they just mute the teacher and do other things or just leave the computer on and continue sleeping. Another negative side
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the problems at
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like bad internet connection, a house full of pets or
kids
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who are shouting, slow computers and laptops and a lot of other things for which
kids
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and their parents are unable to do anything. To sum up, online
education
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has its pros and cons like every other thing, but for sure the traditional way of learning is the greatest and the most effective way.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • continual learning
  • adapt
  • changing technologies
  • societal norms
  • cognitive function
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  • personal development
  • self-improvement
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