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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk to the same global language in the future. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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Choosing a global
language
 is a controversial topic these days. Experts claim that
people
 will have to speak the same
language
 globally in the future.
This
 essay will argue why having a universal
language
 has more positive impacts,
although
 there are negligible drawbacks. On the on hand, many believe the cultural loss is unavoidable due to globalisation and having a single
language
.
Language
 and culture are strictly connected to one another, and it is every individuals’ responsibility to preserve them.
However
, choosing a
language
 to talk to worldwide would be beneficial in terms of communication and getting to know different cultures.
Moreover
, if
people
 have the same
language
, they can talk about differences in culture, and it will reduce cultural shock.
On the other hand
, Some
people
 think if
people
 speak
to
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the same
language
 they become more and more the same as one another and they are not unique anymore. Even though the
language
 barrier, which has a significant impact on tourism, will decrease gradually.
For example
,
people
 who avoid
traveling
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 to foreign countries because of having a rudimentary knowledge of its
language
 will have the opportunity to travel all over the world. In conclusion, globalisation has been growing rapidly, and it is predictable to have the same
language
 to speak all around the world.
This
 essay discussed the merits
such
 as tourism growth and less cultural shock, and demerits, including affecting the countries uniqueness and disappearing culture and local languages.
In addition
, the essay explained that the benefits of
this
 phenomenon outweigh the demerits.
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