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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#people #meat #fish #health #world
What a cruel world that
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 humans to kill another living being just in order to survive. Over centuries, humanities relied heavily on animals in their daily diets. They used their flesh in
serveral
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several
 plates' decorations without any emotional consideration to the other part.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with certain people who are changing their eating habits from meat to vegetables for two principal causes : health and ethics. Recently, we are suspecting a significant portion of our societies
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are adapting healthy regimes. In fact, many
dietatians
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dietitians
dieticians
 tend to convince their patients of the benefits of
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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 lifestyle in order to avoid severe issues on their bodies at old age.
For instance
, Legumes can replace chicken or fish
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because
 they contain
same
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 nutritional facts like protein and metals. Another reason to maintain
these food
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this food startegy
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startegy
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strategy
 is to remain fit and well at
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 time. Many athletes are showing us that using fruit shakes with
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daily
exercices
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exercises
 will provide us with both physical and mental energy, great heart condition and efficient blood circulation.
Secondly
, it is very unhuman what we are doing to the animals that
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 to have an equal chance with other species living on earth. The population had increased
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enormously
 in the
last
 few decades, and their nature demands grow especially in the food industry. As result, these factories are using
awfull
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awful
 methods against these beasts in
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 to produce more rapidly.
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enviromental
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environmental
association
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 are presenting very disrespectful scenes on media that are not supposed to be used. I honestly will defend a small cat if I see a group of kids are torturing it, so why we are
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allowing
other
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 to
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cluttering
spluttering
sputtering
 them cold-blooded. In my conclusion, part of our communities start to
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, and it realizes that we can choose a way of nutrition that will not harm our other partners on
this
 planet. I hope that every government, charity or organization will make an end
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 these mean activities for the good of our future generations.
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