levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. what are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.
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which brings a lot of apprehension with it, is becoming a major threat these days as its rates are on the uphill in most of the cities around the world, particularly among the youth. Use synonyms
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, in my opinion, it is the complete reformation of today's youth Linking Words
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concern of our time.
A major reason for the increase in crimes committed by the youth is the depiction of the glorified world of criminals in Linking Words
movies
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, a teenager who in a movie sees the lead actor whom he completely adores, playing the role of a criminal. The adolescent child by seeing that character often gets carried away by the lavishness and dominance of the role and starts to believe the world of Linking Words
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, the increase in drug culture frequently portrayed in Linking Words
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, the governments should promote health education in schools where all the students should be taught about the harmful nature of drugs. Linking Words
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movies
which depict criminal glorification should be censored or not allowed to be shown to young people.
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among youths, it is important for the government to keep an effective vigilance on the youths. Education and censorship of Use synonyms
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