Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?
Today the
competition
in finding a job between the younger and the older is becoming more popular. This
essay will first
discuss the problems
associated with this
phenomenon which are health issues and an economic crisis, and then
suggest the most effective solutions which are handling the depression and providing enough career's opportunities for everyone.
One problem related to the higher competition
is mental health problems
. Whoever cannot achieve the career competition
several times feel lost and disappointed. They think that they are not fit in anywhere and look down on themselves. This
type of feelings
make them depressed and those who cannot handle well have to face a depression disorder in the future. Another problem is that the Fix the agreement mistake
feeling
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the
terrible economic situation. Without jobs, it is impossible for Correct article usage
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people
to earn money. As a result
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For example
, in the past two years
a quarter of new graduates in Bangkok were jobless and Add a comma
,years
this
led to a significant downward trend in national
economy.
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the national
first
solution is to educate people
to deal with their sadness. Everyone should accept the fact that even though they give whatever they got, sometimes they cannot get whatever they need. It is normal to be grieving for the failure but you have to handle it because life goes on. Secondly
, the government should increase career's opportunities for everyone. The more available job's position
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fewer
people
have to be unemployed. Therefore
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must be taken in order to overcome Fix the agreement mistake
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this
problem. For instance
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the Korean
labors
, the jobless rate fell dramatically.
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problems
and the economic crisis are the most serious problems
due to the competition
of job's seeking, and the essential solutions are to teach them to handle their sadness and provide enough work opportunities.Submitted by Varaiphand on
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