Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

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in finding a job between the younger and the older is becoming more popular.

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associated with

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phenomenon which are health issues and an economic crisis, and

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suggest the most effective solutions which are handling the depression and providing enough career's opportunities for everyone. One problem related to the higher

competition

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is mental health

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. Whoever cannot achieve the career

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several times feel lost and disappointed. They think that they are not fit in anywhere and look down on themselves.

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make them depressed and those who cannot handle well have to face a depression disorder in the future. Another problem is that the

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unemployment rate leads to

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terrible economic situation. Without jobs, it is impossible for

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to earn money.

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, they spend only

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those fundamental needs.

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a quarter of new graduates in Bangkok were jobless and

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led to a significant downward trend in

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economy. The

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solution is to educate

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to deal with their sadness. Everyone should accept the fact that even though they give whatever they got, sometimes they cannot get whatever they need. It is normal to be grieving for the failure but you have to handle it because life goes on.

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, the government should increase career's opportunities for everyone. The more available job's

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people

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have to be unemployed.

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must be taken in order to overcome

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problem.

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government made a policy to double the number of skilled

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, the jobless rate fell dramatically. In conclusion,

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face

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health

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and the economic crisis are the most serious

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due to the

competition

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of job's seeking, and the essential solutions are to teach them to handle their sadness and provide enough work opportunities.