Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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citizen
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have
a
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the
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opition
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option
that
best
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the best
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way to
travel
within the
city
limits is by automobile.While others
beilve
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believe
that
traveing
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travelling
by
bicycle
is a better way. We will discuss both the mode of
transpotation
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transportation
in
details
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detail
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.I strongly believe that cars
is
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the best to
travel
within the
city
boundries
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boundaries
. On the one
hand
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motorized vehicle can cover a lot of distance in small
amout
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amount
of
time
and can be less
exsuting
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exciting
to
travel
by .The one
challege
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challenge
I feel is that due to traffic congestion in the
city
the
travel
time
within the can increases
expotential
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exponential
. But
this
can be avoided by
traveling
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travelling
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in
non peak
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hours.
Nowdays
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workplace
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the workplace
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are
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is
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more flexible with
thier
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their
work
time
and
empolyee
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employee
has a choice to reach
office
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the office
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at
thier
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their
covinent
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convenient
time
.
For
example
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in our
office
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my
collegues
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colleagues
and I
usally
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usually
used to
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carpool
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car pool
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carpool
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together after 12 pm by which
majority
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the majority
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of traffic density was gone and we reach
office
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the office
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within 1
hours
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hour
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. Cars are
more
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a more
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comfortable option to
travel
with at any
time
of the day irrespective of what
time
of the day it is.
On the other
hand
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although
bicycle
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the bicycle
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is better for health but
is
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it
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is
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very
exusting
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exciting
exhausting
to
travel
by , it will take a huge amount of
time
to reach our destination .
Sometime
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if someone wants to reach and attend some important meeting
traveling
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travelling
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from
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bicycle
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a bicycle
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can make them sweaty ,which won't
we
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be
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appropriate for
such
events.
However
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cycle can have an advantage only when you need to
travel
to a smaller distance.In
this
case
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pollution caused by
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an individual
the individual
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individual
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individuals
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is less
signifincant
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significant
.
Travling
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Travelling
by
bicycle
can be
risks
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risk
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during
night
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the night
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since
lack
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the lack
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of
of
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natutal
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natural
sunlight.
Although
amount
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the amount
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of pollution
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caused
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cause
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caused
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by
bicycle
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bicycles
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is negligible
but
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the best way to
travel
within
a
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apply
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city
limits is by
cars
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car
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which is more
time
saving , comfortable and
convinent
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convenient
.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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