The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.

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in

technology

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it

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has changed the way we share and consume

information

.

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has

also

created severe

issue

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like

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a breach

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breach

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in users private

data

and

also

some people are addicted due to

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new trends,

goverement

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government

should come up with rules and

regulation

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to overcome

this problems

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high

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amount of

information

traffic is flowing through the internet the

data

of

user

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the user

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is at risk, hackers

tries

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of

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steal

this

data

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does not belong to them, it is

individual

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right to have

this

information

stored in

secure

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place.

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,only after their

consent

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the

information

should be shared with others. As social media apps like Facebook, Youtube, and Instagram has

stared

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to produce

contents

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at

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exponential

exponetial

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rate,

this

leads to addictive nature in human begin. They start to

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focus and their attention span can

also

go down.

This

nature is somewhat similar to that of a drug or alcohol addict.

Fristly

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First

,

goverement

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government

governments

and big tech companies should come up with

framework

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on how to protect the private

data

of their public or customer.They should well define the parameters for user

information

sharing, and security

measure

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measures

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should be

implemeted

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implemented

so that it becomes hard for hackers to bypass the systems.

Secondly

, To overcome the addictive nature of

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social apps should conduct awareness programs in

certian

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certain

interval

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so users can be aware of

this

habit.

Moreover

, app owners should come up with a warning system to let them know that they are using the platforms for a while and what ill effects it can

led

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to

in

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futher

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further

. To conclude, we should be aware of misuse of internet and how they can be prevented,

also

rules should be implemented.