in some areas of the us a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

Many countries have a restriction rule which is

the

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young adults do not go outside in dark

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especially the USA has followed

this

rule strictly for many reasons. If they must go

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outside in dark

time

, they should be

accompained

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accompanied

with

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adults. I think

this

is a good thing because

the

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teens

should be protected from dangerous matters.

This

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

To begin

with, there are many

unpleasent

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unpleasant

situations are available at

night

time

especially teenagers who are gone outside in

night

time

. Crime are

increased

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day to day tremendously while

teens

are not being mature like youngsters,

as a result

, they might be attacked by some culprits like theft, accident and sexual

harrasment

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harassment

.

For instance

, a recent report by the US article said that

teens

crime rate has declined enormously since

this

law has imposed.

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, if a teen

go

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to

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outside, he should

accompain

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accompany

with his' parents or any other knowing adult person.

Furthermore

, in America

some place

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is

near

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nearby

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by

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forest

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while some wild animals

are always come

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to the residential place in

night

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time

; Teenagers cannot handle

with

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this

terrible situation in order to they might be attacked by

twh

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the

wild animals.

For instance

, more than 30% of the accidents are registered by animals

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on road.

In addition

, these kinds of

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should be protected from

dangerous

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a dangerous

the dangerous

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situation

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situations

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. To conclude, many US cities

is

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followed a rule for protecting

to

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theirs'

teen

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teens

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from

unpleasent

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unpleasant

situation

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in

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at

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night

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the night

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time

.

This

can save many people who

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are teens

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teens

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from victims of incidents.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

trend, I hope

this

process is conducive to saving a healthy society.