in some areas of the us a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?
Many countries have a restriction rule which is
the
young adults do not go outside in dark Correct your spelling
that
time
especially the USA has followed Fix the agreement mistake
times
this
rule strictly for many reasons. If they must go to
outside in dark Remove the preposition
apply
time
, they should be accompained
Correct your spelling
accompanied
with
adults. I think Change preposition
by
this
is a good thing because the
Correct article usage
apply
teens
should be protected from dangerous matters. This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are many unpleasent
situations are available at Correct your spelling
unpleasant
night
time
especially teenagers who are gone outside in night
time
. Crime are increased
day to day tremendously while Wrong verb form
increasing
teens
are not being mature like youngsters, as a result
, they might be attacked by some culprits like theft, accident and sexual harrasment
. Correct your spelling
harassment
For instance
, a recent report by the US article said that teens
crime rate has declined enormously since this
law has imposed. Hence
, if a teen go
Change the verb form
goes
to
outside, he should Remove the preposition
apply
accompain
with his' parents or any other knowing adult person.
Correct your spelling
accompany
Furthermore
, in America some place
is Correct your spelling
someplace
near
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nearby
by
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apply
forest
while some wild animals Fix the agreement mistake
forests
are always come
to the residential place in Change to the active voice
always come
came
night
Add an article
the night
time
; Teenagers cannot handle with
Change preposition
apply
this
terrible situation in order to they might be attacked by twh
wild animals. Correct your spelling
the
For instance
, more than 30% of the accidents are registered by animals cross
on road. Wrong verb form
crossing
In addition
, these kinds of law
should be protected from Fix the agreement mistake
laws
dangerous
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a dangerous
the dangerous
situation
.
To conclude, many US cities Fix the agreement mistake
situations
is
followed a rule for protecting Change the verb form
are
to
theirs' Change preposition
apply
teen
from Fix the agreement mistake
teens
unpleasent
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unpleasant
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
in
Change preposition
at
night
Add an article
the night
a night
time
. This
can save many people who Add a missing verb
are teens
teens
from victims of incidents. Change the verb form
teen
Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
trend, I hope this
process is conducive to saving a healthy society.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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