In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, with
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we can buy clothes, work at
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, and communicate around the world without contact.
This
development
has two sides. One good side, and a
second
negative side. Personally, I think the lifestyle of
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modern
society
is a good
development
.
First
of all, the
development
of
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modern
society
if
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economic health. Because many countries need international trade to level up their economies.
For example
, China's economy is good because it is the industrial
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of the world and other countries buy products from it.
On the other hand
, the current technological
development
is very useful for working. Indeed, a computer today can allow you to work remotely by videoconference.
This
was very useful during the recent Covid pandemic. Because a lot of people had to work from home.
Thus
, these positive sides
also
have limits.
Firstly
,
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international trade allows the whole world to have what it wants, but it creates pollution. Because the travel by boat, plane, or truck to deliver the products emit carbon dioxide.
Secondly
, it is less visible, but
internet
consumption
also
pollutes. When the network is overloaded,
for example
during the covid pandemic, the data
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consume more electricity and pollute more. But
also
, when the
internet
network is overloaded, it can fail and cause big problems because
society
depends on it in some way today. To conclude, the recent
development
in our
society
has
positive
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side, because it permits the
development
of countries. But it has
also
limited, and we need to use
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more intelligently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online shopping
  • remote work
  • virtual meetings
  • contactless transactions
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • efficiency
  • time-saving
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • social interaction
  • fraud
  • misuse
  • dependency
  • technology
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