You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.
dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my
last
visit to the local swimming Linking Words
pool
and to make suggestions to remedy Use synonyms
this
new phenomenon. I have been using the Linking Words
pool
for more or less six years. It is, in fact, one of my favourite relaxing spots.
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to begin
with the issue, I have never seen the swimming Linking Words
pool
dirty until Use synonyms
last
week which I decided to invite my friends to have some relaxing time with me in your Linking Words
pool
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In addition
, what extremely surprised me was the rude attitude of some of your staff that day.
The main problem with that dirtiness was beside the Linking Words
pool
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First
of all, there was a limitation of seats which made us lie on the ground which was covered with body oil. Linking Words
Secondly
, what bothered me the most was that when I asked the staff to send someone to clean the spot they even did not look at me let alone answer my request.
Anyway, I would like to offer some suggestions to curb Linking Words
this
issue. Linking Words
First
and foremost, the staff should be trained how to provide better service to customers. If it is possible, Linking Words
then
the supervising system out to improve. The Linking Words
second
recommendation is to check the quality and purify the water and clean the Linking Words
pool
daily, Use synonyms
this
not only benefits your level of customer service but Linking Words
also
create a better atmosphere for users.
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This
is all I would like to share with you. Thank you for taking the time to read Linking Words
this
letter.
yours faithfully,Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite