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Some people say it is a waste of time when you plan for the future. It is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays ,
people
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 are more interested to plan their
future
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 compared to the past ,
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 , some
people
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 believe that planning for the
future
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 is useless and we should concentrate on the current time .I partly agree with
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 view and in
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 I will explain more details in the following paragraphs. On the one hand ,
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 we cannot focus on the
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 , we can control by planning to minimize impacts.
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 , if we do not control and plan the deforestation issue , we will suffer extreme climate change in the
next
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 few years . There is no doubt that we could not achieve
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 kind of issue without a proper plan and procedure.
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 ,
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 will
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 be noticed and aware of how important to maintain our environment and the earth.
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 , over planning is one of the major issues for many countries . Obviously , some governments spend their budgets on unrecoverable projects like looking for aliens and other similar kinds of conditions. These projects are unuseful and useless for their country's
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 .
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 ,
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 from those countries could be resisted their governments and that can lead to instability of the economy and political situation for that particular country in the
future
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 . To conclude , planning the
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 with proper methods can avoid some damages but we
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 need to consider the negative impact as well . In my opinion , we have to consider our
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 plans with all the current situations .
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 , all the decisions made by us will not be effective and useful in the
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 .
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