Some people believe that to be successful in a sport, natural ability is necessary while others think hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sports

gives more enthusiasm and energy to people who are engaged in

sports

activities.

However

, some believe that natural skill is required to become

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success

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sports

activities while others say that hard

work

and

practice

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utmost significance.

This

essay discusses both

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view points

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, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, natural

ability

is necessary to be

acheive

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achieve

in a game because

this

kind of

talent

gave

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from

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God so they can show

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theirs'

ability

and

talent

extremely.

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Football

player

Mr Mersie, he has a unique

ability

in order to he is being a successful

player

to around the world.

Hence

, if a person will be achieved in a game, it must require any natural skill.

On the other hand

, hard

work

and

practice

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the

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vital for

success

sports

; anyone can

be achieve

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sports

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the sports

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field without any unique natural

talent

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, a legend Indian cricket

player

Mr Sachin

tendulkar

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has had been putting a lot of effort since his's childhood period to enter in

Indian

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the Indian

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team and he was a very normal person when before entering the team. Hard

work

never fails with

continues

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training gives more

success

Therefore

, if a person wants to

success

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in any physical activity, he should do more

practice

and hard

work

thus

, he would become a famous

player

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around the world undoubtedly. To conclude, physical activity provides more benefits to people in

various

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way

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; natural

ability

is required for being successful

games

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in games

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. Hard

work

and

practice

can provide more

talent

by learning. In my opinion, about

this

, hard

work

and

practice

is the most important aspect for being

success

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physical activities. I hope

this

process is conducive to making many

sports

players.

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