Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

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industry has been among the top money-making industries around the world. The massive following of

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has contributed immensely to the increase in money making by certain successful

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there is nothing wrong for the

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to be among top paid jobs but

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has resulted in lesser recognition of the people in other professions who are paid very little as compared to them. The nature of

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makes it a very exciting thing to watch because everything depends upon the way a certain player performs on that particular day. The uncertainty in the result of a game, makes people glued to their seats.

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, the adrenaline rush which one gets when they see their favourite stars performing well

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contributes to the increase in popularity which in the end results in profit-making.The athlete is responsible for compelling the crowd to spend their money in order to watch them play, so it is purely justified the reason they are paid with great sums.

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,

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by large is a form of entertainment, which means it does not make a difference in someone's life ,unlike other professions.

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, a teacher is involved in shaping the life path of their students, which ultimately determines a nation's progress rate.

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, an army professional often sacrifices his life in order to protect his nation from foreign threats. While

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the job these professions do is essential yet they are paid very little as compared to

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creates dissatisfaction among other

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and causes hindrance to their work efficiency. To conclude, in my opinion, every profession should get recognition in monetary terms. The income should depend not only upon profit-making but

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upon the value one profession brings to society.