You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. in your letter Explain why would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mr Paul, I am writing to express my enthusiasm to join your family and care for your kid. I have some justifications to choose

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job. The

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point is that I am an extroverted person and I can adapt to new people very quickly. Another ground is that, due to having several nieces and nephews, I am able to communicate with children and have a good relationship with them.

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, I have studied a lot of books and articles about babies and teenagers and learned how to deal with them. If you are looking for a babysitter who has a certification in

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-aid, I am graduated with a senior emergency-care certificate. It should be noticed that I visited Australia recently and I have some plans for my spare time. I will have visited many tourist places in Australia,

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have tasted local food since I am going to take a cooking course. Thanks in advance for your kind consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Ikram

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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