Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many

people

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argue that affluence and

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are mostly achieved by good fortune

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of hard work. In my opinion, I do not agree with

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point of view.

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, achievement and

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belong to those who work hard. It is undeniable that Rome was not built in one day and

people

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could not become proficient at something after one night. In order to accomplish any goals,

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need to make a lot of efforts that require sufficient

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and practice.

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,

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could make it to the top due to their determination to practice. A good example

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is Lan Lang, a renowned pianist, he was not born as a prodigy of music.

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, he is just an ordinary kid and what he has is his passion for piano. It is said that he spent approximately five hours daily

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piano lessons ranging from scales, chords, tempos, and so on. For

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reason, he is now one of the most distinguished

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in the world.

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, orientation contributes to a person’s attainment. The reason for

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whenever

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start to set a particular goal, they need to set a clear plan on how they are going to go.

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, a good orientation might accelerate

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chance of

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due to

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apply

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clear guidance.

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, a student applying for the

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scholarship

needs to know which school he is going to study and the school’s requirements. By setting a clear plan, it is very helpful for him to prepare and gradually achieve his target. In conclusion, personal goals are only attained by the will to try hard as well as the clear orientation.

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, I believe

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does not mostly go with luck.