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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views

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Many people are of the opinion that the death penalty is necessary to keep the security system efficient in society. While there are some negative aspects of capital punishment. I acquiesce with the view that without it will become more vulnerable to violence. On one , hand the death penalty can be unsuitable for several reasons, one major reason is we have no right to kill other humans.
Moreover
, innocent people can face wrongful execution,
such
 unfair sentences take the lives of innocent people and make other citizens lose faith in law and justice. Everyone has the right to live and no one can infringe
this
 right, irrespective of the person deed and
besides
. Sometimes, criminals repent of their acts and everyone deserves a
second
 chance.
On the contrary
, I believe that capital punishment is obligatory in society
first
 and foremost reason is that it’s an effective deterrent of major crimes. The best course of action to prevent a person from committing a crime is to show the consequences of his/her action. For ,instance the government of China has controlled the rate of terrorism by enforcing death penalties, for members of terrorist organizations
secondly
, the government has large sums of money in maintaining the prison,
this
 money can be used for the citizen of the society. To sum up,
although
 capital punishment has some disadvantages I think it demonstrates the best way of controlling crime and reducing government expenses.
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