The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays many
people
believe that recent
hike in online shopping will have Correct article usage
the recent
negative
impact on high Add an article
a negative
street
shops. I strongly agree with this
notion and I will elaborate this
in Change preposition
on this
further
essay.
Add an article
the further
a further
To begin
with, people
can get high
Correct article usage
a high
discount
on online shopping Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
Add the particle
to compare
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
street
market as in online purchasing the chain of Correct article usage
the street
people
between manufacturar
and buyer Correct your spelling
manufacturer
is reduce
and it will make Change the verb form
is reduced
direct
effect on Add an article
a direct
price
of the Add an article
the price
product
. Due to this
reason online sites give additional discounts on MRP
of any Correct article usage
the MRP
product
. To exemplify, according to one survey by India Today magazine, every online website give
20 to 25% additional discount on any Change the verb form
gives
product
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
local
market.
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the local
Moreover
, online shopping is way more easy,comfortable and time saving
Add a hyphen
time-saving
then
offline shopping as one can easily order any type of Correct your spelling
than
product
by just clicking on their device from anywhere and at anytime
. Replace the word
any time
Additionally
, nowadays most of all the websites give 14 days return policy so if anyone is not satisfied by
Add a hyphen
by-product
product
then
without hasitation
he or she can return that Correct your spelling
hesitation
product
and can get instant money back to their bank account. Furthermore
the Add a comma
,Furthermore
dilevery
timing is Correct your spelling
delivery
also
reduced compare
to past. To cite an example, Amazon which is the leading site for online purchasing provide Change the form of the verb
compared
1 day
Add a hyphen
1-day
dilevery
to their prime customers.
In conclusion, it is evident that online shopping has many advantages Correct your spelling
delivery
compare
to shopping from Wrong verb form
compared
street
market Add an article
the street
therefore
in near
future it will be Correct article usage
the near
definately
difficult for high Correct your spelling
definitely
street
shops to survive. It is recommended that people
should buy from street
shops also
to make balance.Submitted by dhruvdesai222 on
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