The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays many
people
believe that
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hike in online shopping will have
negative
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a negative
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impact on high
street
shops. I strongly agree with
this
notion and I will elaborate
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in
further
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the further
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essay.
To begin
with,
people
can get
high
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a high
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discount
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on online shopping
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to compare
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compare
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to
street
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the street
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market as in online purchasing the chain of
people
between
manufacturar
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manufacturer
and buyer
is reduce
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and it will make
direct
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a direct
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effect on
price
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the price
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of the
product
. Due to
this
reason online sites give additional discounts on
MRP
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the MRP
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of any
product
. To exemplify, according to one survey by India Today magazine, every online website
give
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20 to 25% additional discount on any
product
compare
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compared
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to
local
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the local
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market.
Moreover
, online shopping is way more easy,comfortable and
time saving
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time-saving
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then
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than
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offline shopping as one can easily order any type of
product
by just clicking on their device from anywhere and at
anytime
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.
Additionally
, nowadays most of all the websites give 14 days return policy so if anyone is not satisfied
by
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product
then
without
hasitation
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hesitation
he or she can return that
product
and can get instant money back to their bank account.
Furthermore
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the
dilevery
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delivery
timing is
also
reduced
compare
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to past. To cite an example, Amazon which is the leading site for online purchasing provide
1 day
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1-day
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dilevery
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delivery
to their prime customers. In conclusion, it is evident that online shopping has many advantages
compare
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compared
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to shopping from
street
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the street
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market
therefore
in
near
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the near
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future it will be
definately
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definitely
difficult for high
street
shops to survive. It is recommended that
people
should buy from
street
shops
also
to make balance.
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