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Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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It is sometimes argued that whether authorities or citizens should be responsible for the adverse impact of
manufacture
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 delivery on the environment. In my opinion, I agree with the former idea. On the one hand, I agree that government could play a vital role
to
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 minimising the pollution caused the trading goods. As the authority has the power to enact laws and drive the citizens leading to
a
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superior living standards. In terms of transportation, governments could
imposes
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 several taxes to control the industrial
conducts
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.
For instance
, the engine of a handful of vehicles these days are based on several resources
such
 as petrol, solar energy.
However
, while some of them could run
smoothy
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 without
release
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 any pollution to the environment, petrol is considered as
a
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 main reason affecting the air.
Therefore
, to minimise
air
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polluted
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rate
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, governments could
imposes
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 heavy taxes and fines, ranging from money, possession to these transports.
In addition
, creating
particular
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 commuting time might
also
 be a positive method for authorities to improve the situation.
On the other hand
, I still believe individuals could contribute to
decrease
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 the serious air pollution from exchanging products by transports. In fact, when it comes to driving and using
the
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vehicles, it is impossible for
the
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governments to control the frequency and consumption of particular people. On account of
this
, residents have to raise the awareness automatically about the cause and consequences of their behaviours by encouraging and campaigning others to alter the resource into
environment-friendly
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 one. In sum, I hold a strong belief that while the government should directly take charge
in
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 the mentioned problem, each
individuals
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 are supposed to be aware of protecting our environment by our daily activities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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