Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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option that an individual
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alone is not enough to solve environmental
issues
.
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other
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beilive
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believe
that every individual needs to
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thier
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their
own
acition
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action
actions
to stop
enviromental
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environmental
issues
. On
one
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hand ,
indvidual
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individual
action alone is not
sufficent
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sufficient
to stop
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enviromental
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environmental
issues
because
this
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issues
are on
global
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scale.
Issues
like
air
pollution
cannot be
stoped
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stopped
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by one person by not using his
perosnal vehical
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personal vehicle
,
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diffrence
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difference
made
my
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this
is less significant to large
problem.No
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problems
use of plastic by that
indiviual
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individual
will not reduce the risk to the
enivorment
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environment
. Efforts like using
eletrical
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electrical
electric
vehical
at
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a
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small scale will not reduce
effects
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the effects
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to
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air
pollution
on
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the enviorment
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enviorment
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environment
.Small
effocts
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efforts
effects
like installing
solar
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a solar
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panel
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panels
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at home can help generate green energy but won't reduce
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overall
effects caused by
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energy on
the
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nature.
On the other hand
,
it
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if
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large scale of
polutlation
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population
start taking
thier
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their
own action will make a much large effect.If
large
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the large
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set
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sets
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of
polpulation
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population
populations
start
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using public transport ,
car pool
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carpool
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etc. it can help
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
a lot by reducing
air
pollution
caused by
large
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a large
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number of
car
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cars
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used by
this
group
of individuals.
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of
polution
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pollution
using
cloth
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a cloth
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or
recyled
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recycled
bag
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bags
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instead
of plastic
wil
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will
help
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the enivorment
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enivorment
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environment
by reducing plastic waste from the planet.
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efforts like
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a cleaniness
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cleaniness
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cleanliness
drive on
beach
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the beach
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can help
a
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marine life on
larger
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a larger
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exetend
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extend
extent
.Population together can make
decision
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the decision
a decision
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to reduce the CO2
emmision
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emission
emissions
caused by them.
Although
individual
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individuals
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cannot stop the damage
on
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the enviorment
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enviorment
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environment
alone
but
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efforts made
my
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by my
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group
of
individual
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individuals
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can help solve
gobal
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global
enviorment
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environmental
problem
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problems
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like
air
pollution
, global warming etc.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interconnected
  • globalization
  • remote work
  • independence
  • dependency
  • specialization
  • professional services
  • social validation
  • individualism
  • self-reliance
  • collective action
  • sustainability
  • global community
  • navigating
  • complexity
  • environmental movement
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