In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, with
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the internet
internet
you can shop for anything, work at home, and communicate with people around the world. Add a comma
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This
trend has some upsides and downsides. However
, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
First
of all, the development
of the
modern society is good for the economy, because many countries need international trade to level up their economies. Correct article usage
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For example
, China's economy is good because it is the industrial center
of the world and other countries buy products from it. Change the spelling
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Also
, the current technological development
is very useful for working. Indeed, a computer today can allow you to work remotely. This
was very useful during the recent Covid pandemic,
because a lot of people had to work from home.
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On the other hand
, these positive sides also
have limits. Firstly
, the
international trade allows the whole world to have what it wants, but it creates pollutionCorrect article usage
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because transportation by boat, plane, or truck to deliver the products emit carbon dioxide. Remove the comma
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Secondly
, it is less visible, but internet
consumption also
pollutes. When the network is overloaded, which was the case during the covid pandemic, the data centers
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also
, when the internet
network is overloaded, it can fail and cause big problems because society depends on it in a lot of ways today.
To conclude, the recent development
in our society has a positive side, because it permits the development
of countries. But it also
has limits, and we need to use the internet
more intelligently.Submitted by victor.recoules on
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