In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, with

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you can shop for anything, work at home, and communicate with people around the world.

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trend has some upsides and downsides.

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, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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of all, the

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modern society is good for the economy, because many countries need international trade to level up their economies.

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, China's economy is good because it is the industrial

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of the world and other countries buy products from it.

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, the current technological

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is very useful for working. Indeed, a computer today can allow you to work remotely.

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was very useful during the recent Covid pandemic

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because a lot of people had to work from home.

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have limits.

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international trade allows the whole world to have what it wants, but it creates pollution

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because transportation by boat, plane, or truck to deliver the products emit carbon dioxide.

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, it is less visible, but

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consumption

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pollutes. When the network is overloaded, which was the case during the covid pandemic, the data

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consume more electricity and pollute more. But

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, when the

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network is overloaded, it can fail and cause big problems because society depends on it in a lot of ways today. To conclude, the recent

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in our society has a positive side, because it permits the

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of countries. But it

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has limits, and we need to use the

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more intelligently.

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