It's often said that government spends too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?
It's often argued by some people that a huge amount of wage is allocated to protect flora and fauna, whilst others say that
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should be spent on other problems. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both views in detail in the following paragraphs.
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To begin
with the benefits of defending wildlife. Linking Words
Firstly
, They are important for balancing the ecosystem. Linking Words
For instance
, one ecological role of animals or plants is to act as consumers, which is a vital part of the community. Linking Words
SECONDLY
, it is important for the economy. Conservation areas and preserved natural habitats attract visitors from all over the world. Linking Words
For example
, many places depend on wild animals for tourism Linking Words
such
as Moldavia and Tanzania.Linking Words
Therefore
, defending wildlife brings numerous benefits that would not have been possible without devoting a budget to it.
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However
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also
many other problems that need to be considered to allocate a huge amount of money. Linking Words
Firstly
, educational reform is very important and a government budget should be spent on it. Because education is the primary need of humankind to improve their lifestyle and the world around them. Linking Words
In addition
, health services need to be grown by the government because people do not get proper treatment in the hospitals in less developed nations, which will lead to many social problems Linking Words
such
as vandalism and violence. Linking Words
For instance
, a recent article published that %40 of hospitals in India did not have the fundamental facilities like machines to perform operations or rehabilitation centres. Linking Words
Thus
, these would not have been possible without allocating a tremendous wage to the health and teaching sectors.
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although
authorities should spend money to preserve wildlife, but many other issues that government should allocate a huge amount of money to that.Linking Words
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