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Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Parents are the best teacher.

#parents #teacher
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Some people get hold to the idea that
parents
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 play the most significant
role
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 in educating
children
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, as they spend a long time together before school age and the parenting behaviour is extensively imitated by the child .
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, I believe
parents
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 should be considered the best teachers for the young generations. The majority of what
children
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 learn before starting school happens at home, where their
parents
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 instruct them what is right and wrong and it is highly effective as it occurs
in
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at
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 a very young age.
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, if a
four year old
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four-year-old
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 boy bothers his playmate in the park, his mother would teach him how to behave there.
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, many
parents
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 in Canada, where I live, teach their
children
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 how to read before starting school. Another method of teaching by
parents
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 is how they behave at home, which gives the child the opportunity to learn indirectly by doing the same way as the father and mother are
role
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model
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models
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 for them.
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, in Canada, it is emphasized that driving rules should be respected strictly when a child is in the car, in order to teach them how to obey the law.
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, all the wrong actions of the
parents
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 will be copied by the young ones who are watching them. As a consequence, it is more probable for a boy to become
alcoholic
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an alcoholic
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 if he observes similar drinking habits in his father. In conclusion, the
parents
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 have the most important
role
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 in teaching their
children
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 by both the direct instructions or being their
role
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 model.
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