Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Students

face many things when they are studying. They get distraction ‏most of the time for lots of reasons

such

as they are having problems at home or with friends they are thinking about it or sometimes they just see other people when they finish their classes and they want to go outside to hang with them . For the more sometimes they want to catch up their phone and use social media to be connected with the world far away in the reality. When

students

get boring and they do not get focus anymore the teachers should be grabbing their attention to the classes and make the lesson more interesting to them by using different methods to explain things in effects way,

on the other hand

, teachers

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deliver information to the schooler in an easy way for them not only just that they need to encourage them

also

be motivation optimistic ‏and let them feeling in a high status , full of energy . The teachers can make a competition between the

students

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end Each teacher need to consider the student in the classes By using a different method to help the

students

to be attention.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

distractions
focus
pay attention
lack of interest
motivation
fatigue
sleep
classroom environment
teaching methods
technology addiction
social media
peer pressure
workload
support
active learning strategies
engaging
student-centered teaching
realistic goals
rewards
balanced lifestyle
screen time
breaks
physical activity
support and guidance

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