Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
These days
traffic
is a pressing problem globally.Government seek to find out some solutions.One of the best ways is that boosting
the cost of petrol to control pollution and Wrong verb form
boost
traffic
.I totally agree with some examples.
One of the major real plus point
of increasing the price of petrol is the fact that Change to a plural noun
points
people
become unwilling to use their own private car because they should allocate the
large amount of money for the fuel which Change the article
a
are
needed for their Change the verb form
is
cars
,as result
they tend to use other Add a comma
,result
vichels
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vouchers
such
as bicycle,bus,train,subway and etc.Finally
,the number of cars
would be halved,but it is so important that if the goverment
want to do Correct your spelling
government
this
plan,public transportation should be appropriate enough.It means that there should be modern,comfortable and frequent buses,taxies and so on.In this
situation,people
put public transportation ahead of the
private Correct article usage
apply
cars
.
If I want to find out some remedies for traffic
,I should say there
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they're
a
lot of approaches.Add a missing verb
are a
Firatly
, Correct your spelling
Firstly
people
should be taught that private cars
are so dangrous
for the Correct your spelling
dangerous
enviromnet
.Correct your spelling
environment
This
goal is reached by advertising and educating.Correct your spelling
Government
Goverment
can design some billboards or Correct article usage
The goverment
creating
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create
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a teaser
teaser
on tv for promoting Fix the agreement mistake
teasers
this
thought and this
approach.Furthermore
, children should learn this
lifestyle when they are in
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at
the
low Correct article usage
a
ages
.Fix the agreement mistake
age
likewise
, the tax on private cars
should be increased.It can be useful,since people
may have less tendence
to buy Correct your spelling
tendency
car
as well as it would be great that some bike stations would be located in every Add an article
a car
the car
streets
, and they are readily Change to a singular noun
street
availabe
for Correct your spelling
available
people
.
In conclusion,traffic
and pollution pose a threat for
human life,so both Change preposition
to
people
and Correct your spelling
government
goverment
are responsible for solving Correct article usage
the goverment
this
problem.There are several helpful ideas such
as increasing the price of petrol and tax on private cars
,also
people
should change the pattern of life style
and follow the new instructions.Correct your spelling
lifestyle
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite