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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Nowadays students going abroad to pursue their higher education has very common in days, it will benefit students to explore world-class education and well-paid jobs,
however
 well-developed countries are welcome skilled people while it can be good or bad for the homeland. Considering study abroad help to explore student to experience the foreign schooling system and help them to understand the drives in
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, well-developed countries have top-rated universities that provide good quality learning and
also
 study abroad is an opportunity to know the
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 cultures and drives
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 environment, another advantage of studying abroad is that it enables a student to learn the
second
 or
third
 language,
for instance
,for ,instance Canada
country
 has many opportunities if students know the french language for the part-time jobs.
on the other hand
 , these developed countries can be beneficial or detrimental for their native
country
 depending upon what they choose is important
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 in a foreign
country
 or return to the homeland and develop the native
country
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