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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Nowadays, secondary schools
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in particular
 suffer from the scarcity of
teachers
 as more and more people find teaching less attractive. In
this
 essay, low pay and a burden of the work are blamed to be the reasons pay rise along with an appointment of teaching assistant will be given as ways out. The main problem in secondary schools is low wages. Compared to other realms like medicine, law and technology, an income
that is
 coming from teaching is much lower.
Teachers
 salary is not ample to cover the necessities in life.
Therefore
, they have to attend another part-time job or organise extra classes after their main job .
This
 problem is tackled by making
teachers
' pay discernible and
also
 introducing some incentives which can give motivation for being
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teacher
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. Another drawback of becoming a teacher is
high
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 burden of work on
teachers
.As they are buried with paperwork,
teachers
 feel stress and depression which lead to difficulty in maintaining a work-life balance. The effective way to solve
this
 issue is appointing more teaching assistants.
Moreover
, the government should adopt some school policies aimed at reducing job difficulties. In conclusion,
although
 the shortage of money and being snowed under with papers are serious problems, these issues can be solved via rising wages and creating new workplaces for new
teachers
. To my mind,
this
 responsibility for tackling these issues lies with the government.
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