Childhood is most important period for everybody and child learns many things during this time. Some others say child’s future and career are only built after the completion of their school. What do you think? Give examples to support.
Many people think that
childhood
is the most precious period for everyone and children
learn a lot of things during that period while others believe that child's future can be improved after their education. I completely believe the above-given statement and the reasons are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, Children
learn many things during childhood
by observing their parents and people because children
brains are more active during childhood
the reason they capture things very easily and try to attempt what they observe. Such
as communication, words pronunciation, accent etc. Furthermore
, Children
can be taught politeness, respect, good behaviour, etc. during the period of childhood
. From the age 2 to 5 children
only learn what they observe from their living environment and from the age 6 to 12 they learn academic, sports, discover new ideas etc.
In addition
, Children
improve particular skills and hobbies during the school days which can lead them to future success for an example children
can be a sportsmen
, artists, musicians, Correct the article-noun agreement
a sportsman
sportsmen
singer
etc. Fix the agreement mistake
singers
Moreover
, many children
are born with a particular talent and others improve it by learning. Secondly
, school and college is the platform where children
can grow practically and academically and by ,that they gain individual interest in individual fields. Some can build their future in professional areas and others build their career in the sports area.
In the conclusion, both periods are important for everyone to build a successful career. Interests and goals people set during childhood
can lead them to a successful career.Submitted by Misha on
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