Some people sat that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
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people
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different
cultures
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music
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express there
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music
. For
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people
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from diffrent
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cultures
and age group
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thier
respective places until the anthem is over. Correct your spelling
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shows that how one's national songs brings everyone
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also
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of individual all around the world and everyone
attending them feel connected which each
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present were enjoying with each other. For example
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different
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everyone
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music
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