You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? You should write at least 250 words.

Any country or societies work on rules and laws. If we give freedom to the people to do whatever they want to do, it will be a great disaster for any country.
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essay will discuss on benefits of rules and laws. If a society runs without some rules, few people might hurt other sentiments.
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, In
Aurungabad
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Aurangabad
situated in India,
group
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a group
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of cults made the ruckus around the city because
of
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apply
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the couple
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couple
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were of different religion and
those cult
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that cult
those cults
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didn't
liked
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it
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to see them together. If
proper
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the proper
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rule was implemented at that time,
then
this
thing would not
be happened
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happen
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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