many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There is a contentious controversial argument over

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whether

to save our planet and environment meanwhile some

animals

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are going

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extinct . In

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essay I am going to examine

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question

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should we save all the

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or part of them ,

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I think we should save all of them . Some people believe that we should protect some of the

animals

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. The main reason why they think like

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,maybe because it needs a

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of money ,

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, some of the

animals

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are really dangerous and they do not need protection as they are not threatened by other creatures.

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of dangers for humans and

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they are

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perfect predators , so they do not need help.

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some

animals

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breed a

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of babies in just one time ,so it can help them to keep their number . On the other

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idea that we should save all the creatures on our planet,

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is because they think all

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and even plants

connected

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to each other.

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, if one species

disapear

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disappears

,others will be going to be threatened in the future. To

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illustrate

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, we are living in a cycle in which all the sections are connected .

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, if one species of

insects

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extincts

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which is

usefull

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useful

for

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flower's

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pollination , that flower will be

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extinct

. In conclusion , I completely agree with

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opinion that we should protect all the

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since they are all related to each other and it seems that we should respect our planet more than before and do a

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of research to find various ways to increase our protection.