many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There is a contentious controversial argument over

wheather

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whether

to save our planet and environment meanwhile some

animals

are going

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extinct . In

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essay I am going to examine

this

question

that

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should we save all the

animals

or part of them ,

however

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I think we should save all of them . Some people believe that we should protect some of the

animals

. The main reason why they think like

this

,maybe because it needs a

lot

of money ,

moreover

, some of the

animals

are really dangerous and they do not need protection as they are not threatened by other creatures.

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, snakes

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a

lot

of dangers for humans and

also

they are

a

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perfect predators , so they do not need help.

Also

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some

animals

breed a

lot

of babies in just one time ,so it can help them to keep their number . On the other

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, a group of

public

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support

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idea that we should save all the creatures on our planet,

this

is because they think all

animals

and even plants

connected

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to each other.

Therefore

, if one species

disapear

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disappears

,others will be going to be threatened in the future. To

illustrat

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illustrate

this

, we are living in a cycle in which all the sections are connected .

For instance

, if one species of

insects

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extincts

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extinct

extinctions

which is

usefull

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useful

for

special

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flower's

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pollination , that flower will be

extincted

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extinct

. In conclusion , I completely agree with

this

opinion that we should protect all the

animals

since they are all related to each other and it seems that we should respect our planet more than before and do a

lot

of research to find various ways to increase our protection.