As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In many regions around the world, there is an increasing trend of people purchasing a private

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than benefits, including a detrimental impact that

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's emissions bring to the environment and a huge train that trend may cause to a

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system. If everyone

purchase

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their own

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, the global environment will pay the dear cost of pollution. While it is comfortable to drive in a

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with many

conviniences

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conveniences

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, music player, and fast speed, the amount of emissions combined by many vehicles together is alarming.

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, the activity of burning fossil fuels when driving a

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will create greenhouse gases that

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to

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global warming and catastrophes around the world.

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, the U.S has the highest number of

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owners. In order to reduce emissions, they impose

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that puts

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tax on

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owner

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, so that results in many people taking

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public

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which emits less polluting gases. Another problem

of

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having a private vehicle is that it will create a

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hug

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burden on

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transportation

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infrastructure. Roads and supporting facilities need to be built to control the traffic.

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, if everyone purchases a

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for themself, there are more investments needed to build

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things.

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, high traffic and accidents might happen with many vehicles on a street.

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,

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in Vietnam is having many problems with the increasing of cars as many people are able to purchase them, so the government has to spend a large amount of money to enlarge the roads here. In conclusion, owning a private

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creates a negative impact

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the environment and it

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puts a lot of pressure on a

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system, so I

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, believe that the trend brings more problems than benefits.