As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In many regions around the world, there is an increasing trend of people purchasing a private

car

.

This

essay argues that there are many more issues of owning a

car

than benefits, including a detrimental impact that

car

's emissions bring to the environment and a huge train that trend may cause to a

transportation

system. If everyone

purchase

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their own

car

, the global environment will pay the dear cost of pollution. While it is comfortable to drive in a

car

with many

conviniences

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conveniences

provided like

air condition

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, music player, and fast speed, the amount of emissions combined by many vehicles together is alarming.

Consequently

, the activity of burning fossil fuels when driving a

car

will create greenhouse gases that

leads

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to

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global warming and catastrophes around the world.

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, the U.S has the highest number of

car

owners. In order to reduce emissions, they impose

law

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that puts

higher

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tax on

car

's

owner

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, so that results in many people taking

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public

transportation

which emits less polluting gases. Another problem

of

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having a private vehicle is that it will create a

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hug

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burden on

a

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transportation

infrastructure. Roads and supporting facilities need to be built to control the traffic.

As a result

, if everyone purchases a

car

for themself, there are more investments needed to build

such

things.

In addition

, high traffic and accidents might happen with many vehicles on a street.

For instance

,

transportation

in Vietnam is having many problems with the increasing of cars as many people are able to purchase them, so the government has to spend a large amount of money to enlarge the roads here. In conclusion, owning a private

car

creates a negative impact

to

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the environment and it

also

puts a lot of pressure on a

transportation

system, so I

therefore

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, believe that the trend brings more problems than benefits.