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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A growing body of research suggests there is a drastic growth in the termination of pregnancy among masses, leading to a trending subject
that is
 debatable. It is often argued that
abortion
 shall be legalised, while some are in
opinion
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 that
this
 is a wrong approach to terminate a formed
life
. In my opinion, I believe in the latter view and people with that frame of mind shall be penalised.
To begin
 with, there are several reasons for people to opt for feticide and think it shall be legalised.
Firstly
, unfavourable conditions are raised for couples to bring babies in the real world, which can be due to poor financial status. Another reason can be from the criminal case. Rape,
for instance
, which is a common and deadly issue around the globe, adds to the majority of the cases of unwanted pregnancy, which leaves a person in dilemma for
abortion
.
On the other hand
, any form of
life
 shall be more valued and any act of killing a
life
 is illegal. It is clear that, if
abortion
 is legalised,
then
 the worth of
life
 will be degraded which is against
the
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human rights. A key reason for
this
 is that
,
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 no human
possess
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 a license to end a
life
, which can be devastating to the human race. To cite an example, both men and woman ratio shall be balanced, while there are people with
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a cast
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 of mind of growing their generation opt to kill the woman foetus before birth.
This
 situation can be harmful not only to society but
also
 to the whole world. In conclusion,
abortion
 could not be the solution to any complications and shall be penalised. I believe that
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 human
life
 shall be respected and is equally important to form a balanced society.
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