Some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion which one you think is most effective.

As can be seen, there is a huge number of people who decide to
study
online as it is more effective for them.
However
, others do not agree with
this
. In my opinion, I think that there are advantages and disadvantages to online learning. We will discuss both views in the following paragraphs. Let's focus on the advantages.
Firstly
, studying online is much more effective than studying on-site because
students
do not have to spend money on transportation. According to high
school
research, a grade 10 student spends approximately 50 baht per day going to
school
.
Therefore
, it is a pro for
students
to choose to
study
online learning rather than
study
in colleges, universities, or schools.
Secondly
,
students
can be able to
study
better as they can record voice or video while studying.
However
, there are
also
some advantages of online learning. One thing is that
students
will lack face-to-face communication.
Although
teachers and teachers see each other faces via video conference,
this
does not really make them practice how to manage themselves when they meet others in reality: how to greet, dress, and act.
Moreover
, studying online is difficult for examiners to control bad activities like cheating.
Although
many examiners assigned examinees to open the camera while they are doing the test, the examinees can find other ways to cheat,
such
as asking for permission to go to the toilet during the exam or pretending that they lose internet connection. In conclusion, even though many people believe that studying online is more effective, there are
also
disadvantage that they should not look over. I believe that studying on-site is more effective for me as we can enhance our social skills along with academic skills.
Therefore
, I should suggest the
school
should split the
students
in half. The
first
half goes to
school
every on the 1st and 3rd week of the month, while the rest stay at home, and comes to
school
on the 2nd and 4th week of that month.
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  • online education
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • enhancing learning experiences
  • online platforms
  • self-discipline
  • motivation
  • structured environments
  • democratize education
  • broader audience
  • social interaction
  • internet connectivity
  • screen fatigue
  • on-campus experiences
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