In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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television.
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of
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solutions about which is best. Every
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own points of selection.
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, Internet networking has been improved since
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is very fast and available at anytime and anywhere.
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to read
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anywhere and any time.
Secondly
,
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are too many applications available for
news
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, Hindi
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People
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free of cost like
people
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and they get it day
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today
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.
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usage of trees for pages production. If
people
should read
news
on
mobile
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application
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applications
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which not take any pages.
People
have focused on
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virtual
life more
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real life. Relevantly,
People
just neglect to use real
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for many reasons and I give some solutions for it.
Firstly
, It is
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costly process for producing
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a newspaper
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and lots of
afforts
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efforts
going to make it. Some like, Production use recycling process with help of
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rubbish
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then
it reduced lots of things like cutting of trees and so on.
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,
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of
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newspaper
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should involve lots of photos for looking so attractive.
Moreover
, it going for more interesting things to be read just like Novels. In conclusion,
people
should put themselves in
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real-world
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real
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world with
use
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of
latest
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news
of knowledge. For that,
people
should
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reading either from internet or
newspaper
.
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