One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I'm writing

this

letter to inform you, that your son "Jason" had incidentally broken my vehicle

windshied

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windshield

yesterday. My name is June, I'm your new neighbour and I have been moved into my new house a week ago. I work in the Dpi department as a data officer, since 2009. Yesterday, Jason was playing football

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the front yard with his friends and my

car

was

park

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infront

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in front

of my house.

Unfortunetely

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Unfortunately

, he had

kick

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the ball to my front house and

hited

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hit

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car

window, so my

car

window was damaged and need to send it for

repair

Although

I have a

car

inssurant

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insurance

but

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with the

inssurant

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insurance

claim policy, I have to pay 500 dollars upfront for

repair

Therefore

, I would like to ask you to pay for my

lost

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. I have 2 ways to fix

this

problem,

firstly

, you pay $500 for the claim.

Secondly

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I send the

car

for fix and you pay for the

repair

fees, as I know

repair

a new

windshied

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windshield

only cost 300 to 400 dollars. Could you please let me know which way you would like it to do because I need to drive my

car

to work every day? Please contact me as soon as possible via my phone 0402043289. Kind regards June

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

223 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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