You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some hlep. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explan why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Hi Susan, I hope you are well, I'
m
writing
this
letter to you to ask for some help. I have been
applyed
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applied
applying
a Horticulture course in Australia and the institute
is call
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Sunraysia tafe.
I'
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I'm studying
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m
study a full-time 2 years' course from 9am to 4pm, Monday to Friday. The course will start
early
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Jan 2022, and I will be staying in Sunifate student
accomadation
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accommodation
. As you know, in Australia the living fees and the school fees are so expensive which, I think I need to get a part-time job to cover my expenses. Could you please keep on eye of any jobs vacancy are close by to my school. I can work as a waitress,
sale
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girl or even work
in
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on
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the farm
that is
no
problems
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for me at all.
However
, the job
it's need
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to fit my timetable, as I'
m
only free after school and weekend. I know you have lots of friends and you are the local.
Therefore
, I hope that you can help me with
this
matter because I really need to get a career to cover my outcome as soon as possible. If you find any jobs that you think
it
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apply
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will be suitable for me, please let me know so I can send my resume to
apply
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the job. I'
m
waiting for your good news. Best regards June
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