Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present.

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Dear Aditi, Many congratulations to you on having your newborn! I'm very excited and shall drop by with a special gift for my lovely niece. Actually, I was strolling in the city yesterday and
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pretty elf frock really caught my attention. I instantly thought that it would look lovely on your daughter. It comes along with contrasting mittens and gloves along with an elf cap. To be honest, I mainly selected
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elf frock as
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season is around the corner and I'm sure she would look more beautiful with the petite green costume on along with red gloves and mittens. It will really bring out her brown shade eyes. As you know, I've recovered from covid and doing pretty well. But I wanted to take extra precautions and not visit you for the little one's safety. I will
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the parcel to my security guard downstairs. Could your driver pick it up and deliver it to you by tomorrow? That would be great! Hoping to meet you soon! Lots of love, Manu
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hand-knitted
  • texture
  • personal touch
  • uniqueness
  • effort
  • warmth
  • proposing
  • casual
  • comfortable
  • acknowledging
  • hectic
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