A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/ unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your announcement in the daily newspaper today. As the museum is located in my neighbourhood. I’m writing to apply for voluntary work there. I have participated in some voluntary programs before. It is so satisfying.

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, it gives me the opportunity to communicate with people. I am interested in history and due to my job, I am good at presentations.

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, I have read a lot of books and I have a good range of general information which I believe is practical for working as a presenter there. As I mentioned before, I work at the primary school near the museum and I can join the voluntary program in the afternoons every day. I am really excited about

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job and I can start on Saturday. I look forward to hearing from you. Would you please be kind enough to call and notify me of the position? I will be available every afternoon at 356 091 7271. Yours faithfully, Niloufar Bolandhemmat

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
Organization
Team player
Flexible
Reliable
Positive attitude
Availability
Professional goals
Community contribution
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