Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lot of people in the world consider the feeling of

competition

should be awoken.

However

, others believe that working with a partner is the best

way

to improve

Child's

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experience. I will discuss both of

them

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the

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following paragraph. In my view, the children’s characters are different

also

their views various too. Nowadays young people try increasing themselves result and join in some

competition

that they want to win and will be victories. The

competition

’ name is life and many males or females want to be the winner. I think

competition

helps them improve

knowledge

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their knowledge

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or experience. It is the best

way

, which they go up lifestyle.

However

, we never pay attention to

this

competition

. Every child

have

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their own character that one wants to win. On the whole, the boys and girls should take part in a

competition

, because it helps them improve their work experience and skills in the future.

On the other hand

, the children want to work together. Co-operate the best ways go against up everything of course if it is a team. A lot of young children enjoy it when they do something together,

such

as walk, play games, join in the party. I think we should pay attention to

this

situation. According to me, I agree what many pupils do something collectively. By and large, I think working together is a prospectively

way

in the world.

Hence

, I think two ways are very impotent in life because each

way

have

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negative and positive. In my view,

competition

situation necessary for children than co-operate.