People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Without a doubt,

people

become famous via

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the

internet

and TV and other social media programmes. Some

people

think that

this

trend has positive effects, while others believe

conversely

. In the following

paragraphs

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I will attempt to describe both opinions and present my perspective. To commence with, every

people

use the

internet

and TV programmes to communicate and to develop.

Therefore

, nowadays it is easier

become

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famous

by

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such

programmes.

People

show their unique skills

in

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the

internet

and common

people

can estimate, choice and appreciate them.

For instance

,

people

do not go to the

tournirs

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tourist

or festivals to show their skills and spend time, money and become

stressful

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and nervous. They can share their talents

in

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the

internet

,

such

as Justin Bieber.

In addition

, it is not enough to have uniqueness and even

the

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age can not influence to be recognisable.

However

, some part of

people

do not have uniqueness or special skills, and they attract

people

with their nomad body, bad habits or criminals, even they are ready to kill someone.

This

trend influence

to

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other

people

, especially

to

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young

people

, because they can not think

as

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like

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mature

people

.

Nevertheless

to be famous is very hard in the contemporary world. A lot of famous

people

can not save their

frivate

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private

life. They should

to

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demonstrate everything of their life to keep their position to be

recognisab

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recognised

recognisable

;e. To conclude I adhere

the

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last

opinion

,

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because it

is badly influence

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for

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young

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the young

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generation and it is become addicted to

be

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being

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famous.